income to be able to afford home before, but 1999 housing cost increase which need double income.
cost is more than the rent but they hope the house price increase and sell it late. – less tax if you lose from house. – value increae mroe than you lsot
| Key issue (position) | Supporting reasons (common themes from notes) |
|---|---|
| cost of housing | Young people aim to be ownership of a house but not able to afford it. (Source)income was able to afford home before, but 1999 housing cost increase which need double income. |
| financial | Tax policy for investor increase demand of housing and increase price of housing. (Source) cost is more than the rent but they hope the house price increase and sell it late. – less tax if you lose from house. – value increase more than you lost |
| mental health | (Source) one-third people said that they have poor or very poor mental health. Physical and mental health have relationship and poor in financial lead to poor mental health |
| job | job market with unstable jobs and short-term work. |
| Introduction | Background to the topic – The issue (problem) – cost of housing, mental health, financial, mental health Your position Preview of your two supporting reasons |
| Body paragraph 1 | A topic sentence to introduce the first supporting reason. Supporting sentences, clearly and logically connected, including references to the sources. |
| Body paragraph 2 | A topic sentence to introduce the second supporting reason. Supporting sentences, clearly and logically connected, including references to the sources. |
| Conclusion | Re-state your position. Summarise your two supporting reasons Final message |
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